Doctor Kitty

Read this a few months ago. Pure genius, I think. It was a little hard to follow, though I enjoyed it. I loved the way Screwtape's 'personality' and 'attitude' had ...

I love the title. And just about the rest of the poem. Imagery of the cold elements always seems to paint a very detailed picture in my head. I loved ...

Very emotional and vivid. Me likey.

Ooh. Thanks for the feedback. Sadly, this is all it is. It was simply a test for my abilities to evoke any sort of emotional response in the reader. I'll ...

I love hockey123, before making a post on this site make sure you know HOW to post. Saying that something 'sucks' is not a proper way to critique. Posting in ...

Very creative and...Disturbing. You could combine some of the sentences to make it flow better. It's a little choppy, in my opinion. Poor pandas. :(

If it was in an english book, then it was definitely an excerpt. The novel is about 300 pages long.

Naw. It's a book...

This made me laugh. xD

Very good. It made me sad though...

No one likes ellipses anymore. :( Until I can think of a word that fits and rhymes, disavow will have to stay. I just kinda shoved that in there from ...

Fixedededed. Thanks for your input. :D

(Caradoc > Caradog > cariadus, Welsh for "beloved") Just thought that was interesting. I'm thinking about changing it to Cariadus, actually. :) I really enjoyed this. I don't know if ...

When I read, stories can rarely grab me from the beginning, so I tend to put a little extra effort in capturing the reader from the beginning in my writing. ...

I'd love to work on this more, but today was the first day of school. I have advanced geometry to do. :O Thanks for your input. :D I like to ...